DRAKE

DRAKE

Friday, October 22, 2010

It was a very bright day in the middle of everywhere when the old man cried horse. He walked as slow as he could to his dad to tell him about the horse. His dad believed him, but the rest of the town didn't. I mean how is it possible that there would be a horse in the middle of everywhere. He wantedto prove them all that there really was a horse. So he walked to the flower garden where he has his secret fort. He fell asleep there. In the morning when he woke up his fort was totally gone and he felt a deep breathing on his neck. When he turned around he saw the horse. Red eyes, sharp teeth, and the biggest body ever. The old man wasn't fast enough to get away. So instead he cried horse. The whole town was there in a flash but when they got there the horse was gone. They told him to stop trying cause there's no horse in the middle of everywhere. Well he didn't stop. He went to the middle of nowhere where his second secret fort was hidden. He stayed there untill dark. Then he started to walk back, when the horse came out of nowhere and started circling the old man. He looked mad now. The old man fell to the ground, he was in so much fear. Then he rose up and started to glow. The horse started to slow down to see what was happening. The man turned into a boy and had great big muscles with long hair. His walker turned into a baseball bat. (No I'm not going to make this story about hitting a horse). He threw the basbeall bat into the nearest pond and stared into the horses eyes. The horse was now frightened. The boy grabbed the horse and brought him back to the middle of everywhere. When he got there he yelled "Look what I got!". The whole town looked and saw the boy with the horse. Now since he was now a boy nobody knew who he was. Then he rose up again and turned back into the old man with the walker. The town people rushed out of there houses and cheered. The End. This story reflects on the original "The Boy Who Cried Wolf." I took and did some of my own work on it and well here it is

1 comment:

  1. I think it was very interesting and funny. I liked the part with the bat, Although how did he change into a boy?

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