The day before they got dared to stay the night at Mr. Soars old, haunted mansion. They said they would do it and so comes the day they did it. It was a dark, stormy night. Three unusual kids were walking down Scream Street. They acted all tough as they walked down the street looking around to see other kids in their houses peeking out the window to see what was happening. As they all approached the door, one of them went to ring the door bell. The door then opened all by itself. They thought he was going to be there saying "Hello, there and what can I do for you on this fine night?". Well nobody was at the door, so they walked very calmly although slowly in to the house. After the walked in the door shut behind them, the youngest kid screamed as if he were gushing blood. The other kids turned and said "Be quiet!". Then they turned back and candles all down the hall way lit up without anyone touching them. Step after step they got more scared, but they were determined to do it. They found the first room, it contained some dolls along with a doll house and a very old telivision. They decided to check it out. As soon as they walked in the oldest one tripped over a chord, the telivision turned on. They all backed up against the first wall they felt. A little man appeared on the screen. They didn't know what it was, so they got up to see it. It was a puppet with dark red eyes, it stared at them for awhile. They thought it was just a trick so they decided to leave. Then the puppet started to talk. It had a very deep voice. They all stopped as their hearts raced with fear, they turned around and looked at the puppet. He firmly asked a question, "Want to play a little game?". The kids all still thought it was just a joke so they all at once said "Yes.". The puppet started to laugh hard. The door closes behind them, three chairs get pulled up to them out of nowhere. The puppet tells them to take a seat as he explains the first task. "In 10 seconds one of you will be chained to your chair, you two will have to get him out with a key that is hidden in this room.". 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. "Go." The youngest one gets chained to his seat and starts screaming very loud. The two older ones search and search and search and they can't find it. Then the oldest one checks the doll house, he finds the key hidden in the door. He runs swiftly to the kid un-chains him. The door opens so they all run out. After they run out they younger and older one notice that the other one is gone. They call his name as loud as they can. They hear nothing, so they keep moving to the next room. In the next room there is another telivision, two boxes and they notice there is the other kid in the corner of the room. His leg is bleeding as if it's been split open. They both sit on the floor. The telivision turns on. The puppet has appeared once again. He applauses them with congrats. He is explaining the next task, then the other kid who is bleeding yells "Don't listen to him these are all just dirty tricks, you need to get out of this house!". The kids pay no attention as if they're hypnotized, the other kid looks at the telivision. It's swirling in a circle he swiftly looks away. There is a timer in the back of the room counting down from 20. He doesn't know what is going on so he tries to work his was over to the kids. He tells them "We need to move now bad things are about to happen." AS soon as he says that they snap out of it trying to get out of their chairs but they seemed to be glued to the chair. "The only way to get them out is to pick them up and bring them out of the room." the puppet says. The other kid tried to push the youngest one to the door he pushes him but his leg really hurts and starts bleeding even more. He ignores the pain and keeps pushing towards the door. He finally makes it out of the door and goes back in to the room and starts to push the oldest kid out. The door slams as he is trying to get him out of the room. They don't know what is about to happen then the other kid looks at the timer it has ran out of time. They yell for the youngest kid to run out of the house and call the cops. As the little kid is running a huge wall encloses the hall, so that he can't keep moving towards the door. So he runs back to the room and opens the door the two kids are no longer there only bones. He starts to cry, then he walks out of the room. He moves on to the next room. In the following room the oldest kid is sitting saying to leave and get out of this house. The younger one says "A wall is blocking the door." There is only a telivision in this room. There is also a remote. So the youngest kid turns the telivison on this time the puppet is not there. It is his parents, they're saying that they love him and that they'll be gone by the time your back. He didn't know what that meant but then he turned the telivison off and ran to the window to see if he could see his own house. He barely saw what was happening, then it happened. A huge explosion the size of the clouds peircing ears around the neighborhood. The window breaks so the youngest one runs back to his house. The older one yells "Wait no, don't go it's just a trap!". He didn't hear him yelling so he kept going. By the time he was at his house there was nothing left of his parents. Then he seeks the puppets shadow. He walks quietly towards him. Then he sees the puppet and laughs. There was his mom and dad sitting there with the puppet in their hand. Then he hears a very deep laugh just like the one from the puppet. He notices that his parents are no longer alive.
...I will have night mares tonight. Thanks a lot Xavier, it was well written, although it is a link to a different site if you haven't noticed. Try clicking on it.
ReplyDeleteI know. It will give everyone nightmares. Then while your terified in that nightmare I will be in it to say " BOO".
ReplyDeleteWow. that's kind of dark for you. But I don't get the end. because right now from what I read I'm under the impression that the parents were controlling the puppet dude and then blew themselves up and the kid started laughing because his parents are dead. or was that the puppet that was laughing? you weren't very clear on that part either. oh and one more thing. I DON'T GET NIGHTMARES!!!!1!!!! X\
ReplyDeleteYeah I know sometimes I get really in to something and I just bring all the stuff out in the story
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